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What an awesome forum! 
Just recently discovered the multi-track library.. such a great opportunity for those up and coming.  
Thanks to all that make this site possible. 

This is a great song... the band is very tight. 
If anyone can take a few minutes to critique it would be greatly appreciated. 

- Ray K
Hi!

Ok, I'll take you up on those few minutes you've offered to give a critique.

Can't promise the critique will be of any use mind, but I'll give it a go.

First impressions are that it is pretty good!

I like that you've got the bass sounding nice and present without being boomy. It might be competing a bit much with the vocal during the verses a bit though maybe? You could try and blend it in with the rest of the band a touch, make sure you leave those nice fills poking out though.

Overall, the mix sounds a little - hard to describe - sort of edgy in the 2k-ish region I think. Not sure if it's reverb, a touch over-eq'd in that area or maybe a little overcompressed/limited on the mix bus. I really notice it with the acoustics in the intro (around the 3 second mark)?

I wonder if you mixing on headphones or monitors? For me I found it easier to hear this 'edginess' by monitoring at quite a low level. Works for me, but might not be for everyone.

I don't think it's entirely your fault as I think the raw tracks kind of have a bit of that quality to them to begin with and limiting/compression just brings it out more. I could be the only person that thinks that though.

Guitar solo might be a touch loud, but I guess we all like loud guitars, so might not be a major issue.

Well, those are my thoughts, what do you think?

Cheers!
Hello mikej, thanks for the review.  Your comments are very welcomed.
 
To generate the desired energy, the limiter was pushed a bit hard on this one.  Also, the bass was raised for the same reason.  For reference, I use a combo of Yamaha HS8s (w/ sub), iloud micros & SONY MDR-7506 along with several other general consumer audio components including my Tacoma pickup. Smile 

Yes, the guitar is rockin'.  I did side chain a compressor (sourcing the vocal) just before the outro as it was otherwise aggressively competing with the vocal. 

Thanks for listening.  I will try to return the favor and give you a critique! 

 - Ray K