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Hello! I mixed this song using mostly Waves plugins. I know it could be improved but not sure where. Any criticism is welcomed! Thanks!

After listening on my phone speaker, I noticed it seemed a little harsh in the high end so I have put together another mix.

I found there was too much high end in the last mix and the bass wasn't as good as it could be. I made a few adjustments and this is the new mix.

The reverbs could be a little less prominent , or edited or summat, 'for my taste' but, I,m being a bit nit pickin', you nailed it on the last mix, I found it a powerful, detailed and well balanced, mix.
A.T.B.
Mark