28-06-2018, 11:29 AM
27-11-2018, 07:47 PM
It's a cool mix, sounds simple and natural. I'd just like it had more warm, a more rounder tone all around. It sounds clear and lively, but then it can get a little harsh now and then, like when the choruses come in.
It's a shame the guitar part is so sloppy it fights the vocal to a certain point. It might feel more cohesive with a little more bass and a warmer softer guitar, so they'd feel more like one part. On a similar note, the chorus guitar metallic tone doesn't help to make it sit organically, but I'm aware the amp recording was really can sounding.
Hope this helps, and referencing some Nick Drake won't hurt either!
It's a shame the guitar part is so sloppy it fights the vocal to a certain point. It might feel more cohesive with a little more bass and a warmer softer guitar, so they'd feel more like one part. On a similar note, the chorus guitar metallic tone doesn't help to make it sit organically, but I'm aware the amp recording was really can sounding.
Hope this helps, and referencing some Nick Drake won't hurt either!