Hello there! Here's my try...
Hi,
I think it's a bit too loud to kick.
He has too little thump, and sounds too much like a box.
Besides, it's probably OK.
Hello
The major thing I see here is there is a lot going on on the low end that it's out of control.. Bass, kick, guitars.. They are clashing together in a bad way.
I'm sure you can highpas some stuff out.
Great mix keep it up.
Thanks for your feedback! I'll work on that!