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Hello
I am currently a French producer of electro music (EDM) and I propose to listen to my "French Touch Remix" of HeartPeripheral.
For information, I only kept the main voice and the choruses; the tempo changed from 136 bpm to 128 bpm. The whole piece was produced with Cockos Reaper and a ton of plugins.
Good listening and do not hesitate to give me your opinion
J-A.

I liked your version in the first few bars. Only thing and this is just my thoughts, it is very biased towards mid-top and not much else.

Thank you Cranky Emu for your advice. It was my first mix with new material and I did not have good quality monitor speakers a year ago. I think I've evolved now in terms of the sound quality of my mixes. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning

vocal seems to be filtered (or really mid heavy) and buried in instruments.
Try to take it a bit to the front. Whole track would benefit drastically!
Maybe some FX automation to add movement?