I know it is a long shot to get a critique on here, but I am going to try. I mix a lot of songs on this site and really love it. If I get a response, I am going to be more active on the forums. I am an online student for Full Sail.
I like your mix sounds pretty good on my monitors ,one thing that jumps out is a little clipping on the bottom end especially the bass drops 0:00:29 ,0:00:35 ect in the 50-80hz are maybe some peaking transients could be tamed with a dynamic eq like the free Nova TDR with a fast attack and release .
The strings would sound awesome a touch louder and spread out a touch more.
Just some minor things that come to mind.
This was one of my first hip hop mixes a few years ago and have to give it another go !
Keep the mixed coming !
Cheers
Wow thank you so much for the critique. I am definitely going to look into implementing your advice!