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Hi guys it's my first time here

i've tried to mix this song and i'm pretty happy with the result but would be great if somebody else listen my mix.
I know that the vocal needs a lot more automation, especially at the end, and also i'm not 100% satisfied by the way it sounds


Leave a comment if you have any suggestion

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Version 2:

-The kick now is a little bit less boomy (not too much because i kinda like it ).
-I tried to get rid of the mud around 100hz.
-Wrote a better automation for the vocal, added a little bit of top end and just a pinch of distortion on it

Hey dude,

I really like your mix.
The guitars sound defined to me and I can clearly seperate each Instrument.

Though I would give the vocals a bit more presence (or air).
They sound a little dull to me. Also a little bit to dominant.

Also the kick is a bit boomy for my taste, but that's maybe just on my system.