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I'm happy when I can express scene of lyrics

2nd TiPa & haitiabsolut ver

Thank you for listening

The vocals seem a little louder than the instruments especially in the beginning. Drums are laying in the background and almost non existence.
I think you could lay the main vocal more in the pocket of the song.

Hi haitiabsolut

thank you for the advice
I am studying mix for wanting many people to enjoy artistic music
I will reconsider the balance of vocals and instruments
I respect your opinion

Thank you very much

Hey,

The drums are quite ok, rythm guitars are a good. The lead vocal is definitely too high and maybe too dry. And I don't hear the bass.
The solo guitar is very dry too !
It's like you've done 75% of the job

Hi TiPa

Thank you for the advice
I will reconsider the balance of vocal and instruments
I also want to add a little reverb to the vocals
The solo guitar made it from a musicality to a dry tone, but I would like to add a little reverb
I respect your opinion

Thank you very much

Hi TiPa & haitiabsolut

I made a new version
Please listen