21-11-2016, 10:49 AM
21-11-2016, 02:32 PM
Sounds good.
It feels a little "safe". I think this is the kind of track that needs to be worked a bit to get it to the next level. It's so atmospheric and open and slow that there's so much room to do more in terms of effects (without going overboard) and dynamics.
Specifically, the background vocals could use "something". They have a certain attitude and punctuate the song that they could be highlighted more. Not in volume but in tone. They could be made more special.
It could use a bigger bass. Something to hold down the foundation of the song.
There's a distorted guitar later in the song that has a bright tone that distracts from the vocals.
That's it I think.
It feels a little "safe". I think this is the kind of track that needs to be worked a bit to get it to the next level. It's so atmospheric and open and slow that there's so much room to do more in terms of effects (without going overboard) and dynamics.
Specifically, the background vocals could use "something". They have a certain attitude and punctuate the song that they could be highlighted more. Not in volume but in tone. They could be made more special.
It could use a bigger bass. Something to hold down the foundation of the song.
There's a distorted guitar later in the song that has a bright tone that distracts from the vocals.
That's it I think.
21-11-2016, 07:43 PM
Cool go for it .Cheers for feedback . Have to be careful with bass