So I did this one too, kinda messed up the name.
I feel like the lead vocals are a little bit reverb heavy and lost at some points. Also, I'm losing the snare during the double kick 16th note sections-- perhaps ride the volume of it? Also the overall tone of the snare is a little thin and dry, it dies quickly and could have more sustain and depth. You might try compressing and/or blending in a different sample. Also, the bass guitar is a little bit loud and dominating (very apparent to me on the verses).
Great kick drum sound!
Keep at it mate.
Now that you mentioned it I hear it too.
Thanks for the feedback.