Like it . Nice vox. Not much else to say
Hello
*It's a good approach. one thing I would change is volume on drums and lead vocals... they could come down a couple of db.
*At 2:38 I didn't like that overall volume drop you did.. not sure what happened but it threw me off.
*eq needs some cuts here and there to keep the harshness of the tracks from jumping out.
Other than that I think this is a decent approach but can be improved.
keep it up.