Here my mix of this track.
Hope you'll enjoy, don't hesitate to comment.
"oh no!"... you left out the "oh no", my favorite part! nevertheless, strong mix. (cymbals maybe be clipping a bit)
Very good! I like this vision of the mix very "thick" and dry
Maybe a little more paning would be very efficient but that's pretty efficient!
(sorry for my bad english I'm french)