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Hello！I am a chinese student from Beijing Film Academy. This is my mixing version,I am very appreciated that you can give some advices to me! Thanks! Pls!

Bump! some advices pls！THX！

Because of in the school,I don't have monitor amps to mix it.Only have headphones...and I don't know how to master so I use LANDR...

Any advices pls？

Sorry. I adjust some setting.So this is the new version.

You don't have to master your mixes, this is not a mastering forum

There is a nasty flanger at 1:18 that's not making a lot of sense to me. It also sounds like you haven't read the FAQ about this song. Otherwise you would have fixed the Dead-Enemies-Whisper at 1:37. That's bad because it destroys a lot of the tension and atmosphere. The "Dead Enemies"-phrase just sounds plain wrong without changing it so I would recommend that you read the FAQ. This is one of the small details that seperates a good mix from a bad. The same is true for the snare sample in the blastbeat at 3:49 which is too loud. You need to bring it down and raise the faders of the original snare tracks or the blast will sound awkward.

I really like the overall tone of your mix. The pitched guitars in the last part sound strange, but this part is all about sounding strange and weird. So I was quite suprised to hear what you did to those guitar melodies and pleased because it sounds really cool. You should have made a fadeout at the end to create the illusion that this song never ends.

Oh thank u very much！I will follow ur advices and adjust this song！

(06-05-2015, 04:28 PM)Blitzzz Wrote: [ -> ]You don't have to master your mixes, this is not a mastering forum

There is a nasty flanger at 1:18 that's not making a lot of sense to me. It also sounds like you haven't read the FAQ about this song. Otherwise you would have fixed the Dead-Enemies-Whisper at 1:37. That's bad because it destroys a lot of the tension and atmosphere. The "Dead Enemies"-phrase just sounds plain wrong without changing it so I would recommend that you read the FAQ. This is one of the small details that seperates a good mix from a bad. The same is true for the snare sample in the blastbeat at 3:49 which is too loud. You need to bring it down and raise the faders of the original snare tracks or the blast will sound awkward.

I really like the overall tone of your mix. The pitched guitars in the last part sound strange, but this part is all about sounding strange and weird. So I was quite suprised to hear what you did to those guitar melodies and pleased because it sounds really cool. You should have made a fadeout at the end to create the illusion that this song never ends.

Done! I don't have any thought to deal with the whisper...I try to use pitch,comp,EQ and some fx but finally delete them.

did you read the faq and listened to the ref mix?

(07-05-2015, 04:32 PM)Blitzzz Wrote: [ -> ]did you read the faq and listened to the ref mix?

yup...and I still mix a bad one？sorry,I read it again now.