oops - sorry Greg! 
Your mixes are getting better. It might be hard to hear in your environment, but there's a lot of 'wool' in the mix usually from a build up of energy somewhere in the lower mud range. Most instruments have some resonance down this low, even if the main focus of the instrument's range is much higher.
It's a common problem with all songs and will become easier to hear with time and experience.
Judiciously cutting away some of the 'unneeded' energy from some instruments in this range will open up the mix a little.
Not saying that you should do yet another version of this particular song, BTW! You probably have had enough of working with it by now
Just retain for future reference to help you out with your next mix.
Dags
Your mixes are getting better. It might be hard to hear in your environment, but there's a lot of 'wool' in the mix usually from a build up of energy somewhere in the lower mud range. Most instruments have some resonance down this low, even if the main focus of the instrument's range is much higher.
It's a common problem with all songs and will become easier to hear with time and experience.
Judiciously cutting away some of the 'unneeded' energy from some instruments in this range will open up the mix a little.
Not saying that you should do yet another version of this particular song, BTW! You probably have had enough of working with it by now
Just retain for future reference to help you out with your next mix.
Dags
So many songs, so little time!