03-04-2013, 10:41 AM
Many thanks for the feedback. Soon I will be doing a full mix of this track where i will probably get a little creative with the arrangement and omit a few things here and there to free up the sonic space. Good tip on using delay instead of reverb - i often don't immediately think of that when trying to create space around the audio so i will experiment with that. I tried to get a little 'sparkle' into the detail (some nice bell-like qualities to some of the elements) which is why there are some high frequencies quite prominently in the background. Now to get to work... 
If i make a comment on your mix i would be very grateful if you said something about mine - all discussion leads to increasing all our knowledge! thanks lovely people :)