21-11-2018, 08:56 AM
Hey JRod - sounding good. The balances sound nicely done & the vocals are controlled and present.
The lower register vocals at the beginning of the song have a little bit of mud in the low mids that could improve their clarity if it was cut a little. The mix overall has a bit of a buildup in the low mids that is just veiling things a tad. - that 250-350hz area maybe.
On a "bigger picture" scale, the dynamic contrasts between the verses and choruses could be amplified a bit more. At present, the chorus doesn't seem to hit as hard as it should - maybe some automation would help there.
Nice work!
The lower register vocals at the beginning of the song have a little bit of mud in the low mids that could improve their clarity if it was cut a little. The mix overall has a bit of a buildup in the low mids that is just veiling things a tad. - that 250-350hz area maybe.
On a "bigger picture" scale, the dynamic contrasts between the verses and choruses could be amplified a bit more. At present, the chorus doesn't seem to hit as hard as it should - maybe some automation would help there.
Nice work!
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