Thoughts?

[wesleyamltd]

Let me know, I went through this quickly.

There's not enough low end on the guitars or body.
I think you attenuated 300hz, 500 hz and 1k sacrificing the character of the midrange for clarity. There is too much 8/10k energy making the mic thin and harsh.

There needs to be glue in this mix, the snare sound disconnected from the kit. Where there toms in this mix? I don't remember hearing them in yours.

Try making room for the bass kick relationship frequency wise. meaning. if you boost 70hz on the kick than notch that area on the bass slightly to give room for the kick. Same goes for the rest of the instruments. what you do for one instrument will have an effect on another, think about what you're trying to accomplish here. In no way is this mix muddy its quite the opposite. Its not a race, its a learning tool. Slow is smooth and smooth is fast. Precision and speed will come with time.