08-12-2016, 04:08 AM
Here's what jumps out at me.
-I think part of what might be making the kick difficult for you is it fighting with the floor tom. You could think the tom out a little and pan it as you would a floor tom and it'd open up the center of the kick drum. In the chorus and bridge the kick sounds fine. It may have too much low end but I can't judge that accurately on earbuds. You could probably use less of the Sub track.
-The more I listen the more I think more/wider panning might help open the song up in general.
-The vocals sound good but are getting obscured a bit.
It's not bad. Mostly it lacks clarity. Partially due to elements crowding together in the image and partially due to some low mid 'tubbiness'. Keep at it.
-I think part of what might be making the kick difficult for you is it fighting with the floor tom. You could think the tom out a little and pan it as you would a floor tom and it'd open up the center of the kick drum. In the chorus and bridge the kick sounds fine. It may have too much low end but I can't judge that accurately on earbuds. You could probably use less of the Sub track.
-The more I listen the more I think more/wider panning might help open the song up in general.
-The vocals sound good but are getting obscured a bit.
It's not bad. Mostly it lacks clarity. Partially due to elements crowding together in the image and partially due to some low mid 'tubbiness'. Keep at it.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.