03-01-2021, 05:25 AM
Hey, Patsculle!
Second version sounds better to me, no doubt. Third version is very scooped, the snare sounds hollowy... I'd say it's a step back.
Both versions have synths and piano set too loud. They should be more felt than heard (or altogether muted). That piano doubling the vocal melody in the chorus is so foolish, it's almost revolting (sorry arranger, wherever you are). The synthesised strings and horns are corny as heaven, specially that loud...
The triggered snare is just too strong on the ghost notes.
Those are things that caught my attention, hope it's useful for you.
Second version sounds better to me, no doubt. Third version is very scooped, the snare sounds hollowy... I'd say it's a step back.
Both versions have synths and piano set too loud. They should be more felt than heard (or altogether muted). That piano doubling the vocal melody in the chorus is so foolish, it's almost revolting (sorry arranger, wherever you are). The synthesised strings and horns are corny as heaven, specially that loud...
The triggered snare is just too strong on the ghost notes.
Those are things that caught my attention, hope it's useful for you.