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How can I improve this? - 197Max - 16-06-2018

What do you think of this and how can I improve?


RE: How can I improve this? - Sasquatch1974 - 06-09-2018

I think the main issue with this is the kick. Through my headphones, it's making me feel like I'm being punched in the sides of the head every time it hits. Everything else seemed OK, but I couldn't really listen properly because of that sorry. I'm guessing it was way over compressed.


RE: How can I improve this? - 197Max - 08-09-2018

(06-09-2018, 07:40 PM)Sasquatch1974 Wrote: I think the main issue with this is the kick.

Is this any better?


RE: How can I improve this? - Sasquatch1974 - 11-09-2018

(08-09-2018, 03:10 PM)197Max Wrote:
(06-09-2018, 07:40 PM)Sasquatch1974 Wrote: I think the main issue with this is the kick.

Is this any better?

It certainly does sound better. I still think it sounds a little over compressed, or possibly too much sub bass, but it only notices on a handful of hits. It's pleasant to listen to the track now, and it sounds good. My personal taste would be to have the Hammond organ a little louder, but that's just choice.


RE: How can I improve this? - Dangerous - 12-09-2018

Sounds good through headphones. I like the guitar tones and vocal treatment. Very Nice! Hammond could perhaps do with some extra dirt to help it compete. For some extra impact I reckon you could have some fader fun with the intro parts, just to help with the build and drama, if that makes sense. Great work.