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children of no-one (led remix)
#1
hi,

this is my first entrie here.
I hope you can give me some feedback fore my work on this track


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#2
First off, it sounds like you've imported the 44.1kHz raw multitrack files into a 48kHz project without sample-rate conversion, so they've played back about 1.5 semitones too high in pitch, as well as slightly munchkinising the vocals. Compensating for that by slowing it down, the balance doesn't seem too bad nevertheless. I wonder whether you could give the vocals a bit more level in the mix -- they're relying a bit too heavily on the 1-2kHz region for cut-through, which makes them sound a bit thin to me. You'll probably have to clear out a bit of the 500Hz-1kHz region of the guitars to make space, though, otherwise everything'll start sounding muddy.

In addition, the kick drum is mostly operating in the lower octaves, and disappears rather too much for me on anything smaller than a subwoofer. I have a feeling you might have applied a lot of LF boost there, and lost the important MF and HF components as a result.
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