Blue: Updated

[ptalbot]

I realize that most of the instruments are competing in the same kind of frequency range.
It didn't bother me that much though, as I kind of liked that 'wall of sound' created by the guitar + rhodes/vibra/toy piano.
Indeed I was looking for that effect to create a warm background tapestry. So much for separation!

In the end though, and I think this is where you are on the right path, I struggled with the brightness, most likely not realizing that my 'wall of warmth' was making me push some 1-2k too far and making my mix a bit brittle and harsh... the bass in particular in my version has too much of that and not enough low-end. I realize that now, after listening to some of the mixes submitted here.
This is such a great learning experience for me! I love it.

As to the MIDI, I'm glad you find it useful.
I thought people might want to tweak and use their own sound and it could be fun to hear.

Using the toy piano as an intro is a great idea.
I'm really looking forward to hear your creative irresponsibility!