My try :P

[teodorslavov]

Here is my try.....

[Tim D]

i really the guitar and ukulele tone u got ... but i think u gone with too much highs in the vocals, flute and drums generally..
but i like the verbs used.. kinda of lo-fi witch i found is very interesting.

and the "D" 73hz is lots louder in volume than the lower "C" on the bass notes.. i ran in this same problem in this mix. fixed it with a narrow cut at 73hz and very little multiband compression at those 2 notes of the bass after the cut.. a notch filter didnt worked for my ears.

for me its just a matter of reevaluation at the eq freqs and push back some of those highs and mid-highs to make room for the vocal/flute.., make some depth and also to reduce the simbilance of the vocals/ rispid air of the flute, if that makes sense.

pce!

[takka360]

For me i think the lead vocal is a bit wet and a little to much bottom,there is also lots of high hats and snare that
seems to take over a bit much.Also i feel te flute is a little to wet and could come down a tad.