Heartbeats

[pauli]

No, you are correct. The distorted guitars were giving me trouble finding a balance while still sounding good in their own right, and they definitely need to be louder. It's been suggested that I lean out the arrangement as well, so I'm looking into that also. I was so proud of the good vocal sound I accomplished that much was overlooked.

The bass is another thorny issue, you're correct there as well. The kick could come down and some sidechaining seems prudent also. The challenge for me here was getting pleasant individual sounds while maintaining the balance. I'm working on another version.

Thank you for your review I'll look at yours when I get some time.