Through My Eyes Jay Menon Mix by Alex Wons

[alexwons]

My mix of Through My Eyes
Alex Wons

[Rustyruss]

Hi Alex , nice overall tone and warmth, I like the placement of your elements, Also nice tone of your elements. On first pass it sounds fairly solid and open .
On second listen a few critiques; as main elements enter; the bass is a little to forward, thus masking the vocal; for my personal taste the vocal is a little heavy in the low mids and needs a little shelving which will then make it match the sonics of the rest of your elements. but a nice tone overall.
The solo acoustic a little louder and cleaner or possible it own verb space?
As this is a sparse arrangement as such, I would say you have more room to be creative with some ear candy; verbs ,delay, etc a bit of automation.
I feel the drums need some sustain for example a verb with a med delay time; just to fill in those spaces, and for them to blend together within the track.
I like where you have taken this. All my comments above are said with the idea of small gentle adjustments nothing to heavy handed.
well done.

Keep on keeping on.