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INTERLUDE - PEPPERMARK
#1
Cool song. Really liked that ending orchestra vive.
Anyways, this is my take on it.


.mp3    INTERLUDE.mp3 --  (Download: 16.22 MB)


.mp3    INTERLUDE_2.mp3 --  (Download: 16.22 MB)


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#2
glad you liked it!!!

great mix! but in my opinion it could use some changes to make it even better:

- first mix i listen where the bass grit is bit loud!! i aprecciate that, but in this case, it took away the brightness of the guitar tracks. since that's a guitar driven song, i would turn the bass grit down a bit, and bring back the brightness of the guitars. you can make the bass "louder" but still "behind" the guitars by distorting or saturating the bass grit even more.

- in the build up, maybe turn that kick up 2-4dB

- sometimes i feel the drum shels are pushed back, though the cymbals are perfectly balanced and cristal clean (and i loved it). maybe paralell compression would help that.

thanks!!!
Peppermark

if it sounds good, do it bruh
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#3
Yeah I thought this was pretty good! I do think the changes mentioned above will help to bring the guitars out and forward just a touch more.

Edit: Forgot to mention that I think I do miss the delays on the intro guitar...

Cheers!
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#4
Thanks for the input guys. Gave it another listen with a more organic feel on it as listening on phone speakers mix sounded quite harsh.. As for the intro guitar delays, I didn't see a delay intro guitar unless I deleted it by accident.
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#5
(14-03-2023, 04:21 AM)Shul Wrote: As for the intro guitar delays, I didn't see a delay intro guitar unless I deleted it by accident.

The library mix has a delay effect on the guitar during the intro section Smile.

Cheers!
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