Dark Ride - Deny Control (NARD STUDIOS)

[arkana]

Hi, newbie here..
Love the song and the project
Great project overall!

i just learning (again) about mixing
Mixing this project about 3 hour
Any comment is welcome

This is my V1 Mixing and Mastering
Still not satisfied on the drum
Will correct it next Version

[arkana]

Version 2!!

Log :
Correcting the drum mix
reduce sub on bass track (Still haven't car check yet)

Any comments welcome 

[spycs]

Hi arkana. You got me headbanging, cool mix.

Have you tried adding some more low end to the Kick drum? I think a few more dB would really help the song's momentum.
The guitars' midrange seems like it could be massaged some more, sounds nasal at times.
The snare is almost there, I'd like it to be less boxy (look around the 250 to 500hz range).
More overheads? I like high-end

[arkana]

Hi arkana. You got me headbanging, cool mix.

Have you tried adding some more low end to the Kick drum? I think a few more dB would really help the song's momentum.
The guitars' midrange seems like it could be massaged some more, sounds nasal at times.
The snare is almost there, I'd like it to be less boxy (look around the 250 to 500hz range).
More overheads? I like high-end

Thanks for taking the time to listen
Will try on next version,

im sorry but i dont understand term of "nasal", its midrange need to be eq cut? or what can i do for the guitar?
or maybe because i boost (maybe too much) the rhythm guitar around 700-800hz? i boost that range because i like the sound, fell like more tight

[arkana]

Version 3! Subtle change..

Log :
- Kick : More low end, more click, more attack, reduce the volume 
- Snare : More attack, lower sustain, reduce 200hz and 500hz (i think the snare still too loud?)
- Ride, Crash, OH : change compressor setting, boost top end
- Bass : Cut the "grind" frequency

Any comments welcome 

[AudioAlien]

nice drums!

[arkana]

nice drums!

Thanks