Angels In Amplifiers: 'I'm Alright' - By a Noob

[EyangTimboel]

After read some ebooks and watch some video tutorials, i try to mix a song. This is my first rendered file. I'm a noob, please give some comments.

[thedon]

Hi
your mix sounds pretty well balanced ,,on my monitors sounds a little thin and top heavy ,Just wondering if Are you you using headphones or monitors? !

[EyangTimboel]

Hi
your mix sounds pretty well balanced ,,on my monitors sounds a little thin and top heavy ,Just wondering if Are you you using headphones or monitors? !

You're right, i've used $4 headphones and old compo as monitor
When i try to play at mobile phone using headphones, the LF not comes up
Thanks for your feedback, i'll try to fix it.

[EyangTimboel]

Edited, here is the result. I hope it is not too fat at the bottom

[thedon]

Hi
your mix sounds pretty well balanced ,,on my monitors sounds a little thin and top heavy ,Just wondering if Are you you using headphones or monitors? !

You're right, i've used $4 headphones and old compo as monitor
When i try to play at mobile phone using headphones, the LF not comes up
Thanks for your feedback, i'll try to fix it.

That sounds much better especially for headphones !
listening and comparing to reference recordings helps me .

[EyangTimboel]

Thanks a lot for your feedback. That's the best I can do for now. I hope I can improve my music mixing skill from this forum and your constructive comments.