My try

[georgyj]

Maybe someone likes it.....

[sano]

Love your take on the mix.

[georgyj]

Love your take on the mix.

Love is even better than like.

[Mike Senior]

I like a lot of what you've done with the guitars and vocals here, as well as the way the delay and reverb effects fill out the texture at different points.

However, the drums sound a bit anaemic, in my view -- the kick's almost modern metal! I'd try to make a bit more of the overheads for a track in this style, not least because the cymbals will help you give a sense of width and upper spectral extreme to the mix as a whole. If you start building the drums mix from the overheads rather than from the close mics, I think you'll get a bit more of a natural sound, which would probably be a bit more appropriate here.

The sibilance on the lead vocals is stressing my ear a bit, so perhaps add in some (more?) de-essing there. I wonder whether you've dialled in too much 4kHz on it too, because it feels a little grating at moments. If you want the clarity for the vocal there, try cutting some of that frequency out of other tracks instead.