Jump Across (dylan513)

[dylan513]

Here's my mix of Jump Across. Let me know your thoughts.

[NiceDuck]

I like how you focussed the midrange of all the different tracks, resulting in it being really balanced.
In contrast to that, I feel a bit of a lack in the low end and especially in the high end.
The transistions could be a bit more exciting, maybe use automation to pump up the parts, that should be more in your face, like the chorus.
The vocals sound a bit unpleasent, I think because of the distortion - maybe back that a bit of, or reduce frequencies that are causing this unpleasantness (I'd suggest the low mids) prior to the distortion.

Hope this helps - take everything I say with a grain of salt - it's just an opinion ,
Cyril

[dylan513]

Thanks so much. I think you're right on. I'm noticing my mixes have been very midrangey compared to others. Probably because I'm still getting used to some new speakers. And smart idea about reducing low-mids prior to distortion. I didn't mean for the vocals to be super distorted, it just got away from me. LOL.

Thanks again for listening!