Dark Ride - Deny Control 210514 (Sonic Alchemy Lab)

[motomojo]

Comments welcome

Cheers
Motomojo

[motomojo]

Oops put up the wrong version first time. Just noticed the file name. That's what I started with for the final and then uploaded it DOH!
Here's what should have been version one. I'm sure it needs work as i've not mixed any real metal in my career so this was a challenge
for me that I welcome but somewhat out of my comfort zone.

Cheers
Motomojo

After some constructive comments (not here mind you) And seeing the info post finally (wish more artist would provide)
Here is my redo having a bit more insight.

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