Hey Dminister! I think the guitars need to come up in volume. I think that tremolo in midchannel is a bit 2 much, was that an effect you put on masterchannel? not to bad though gj.
Hello ! I like the tonal balance, and how you highlighted the drums.
I think that you could improve the lead vocal with a more reactive compression, the first syllables tend to be too loud. For example in the 1st verse "what his family needs", "what" and "fa" are too loud. It may also reduce the unpleasant "echo" that happens with the reverb on these loud syllables.