Hello
About low end. Now the kick has more room but maybe a hint too much
If you have time you could bring the bass up just a bit and take it down with sidechain comp or ducker drive by the kick.
How did you alter your mix? The low end of bass seems a little uneven. Like below 100 hz. Was your master multiband comp taking care of that in your first mix? If so you could work a little more with just the bass channel to get more solib and balanced low end.
Compare your mixes and put an eq in the master with LPF at 100 hz.
That second or first acgtr (track 9) could be a little louder and better balanced with the elgtr. It sounds good in the intro.
The piano could have a little more edge to stand out in the mix. And yes I know there are many elements trying to get to that n:o 1 place. Maybe a little more panning and then just automation to bring solos closer to the center if needed.
Now only the percussion is panned clearly away of center.
Have you reduced the lead voc reverb or just a new eq settings? It sounds a little dry and edgy like I could mix a lead voc before adding a reverb.
This isn't an easy song to get a balanced 3 dimension mix. If I remember correct I had troubles to fit different parts together and have some natural depth in the mix.
If you ad more reverb to the lead voc you might need to check the other instruments as well in order to keep the lead voc up front. Although that elgtr has quite a lot of effect printed to the track so that could be your second mark point after the lead voc.
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