One Minute Smile - My Mix

[supep]

Hi!!
This is my Mix.
Nice power song. I love this voice.
Cheers

[supep]

Mix V2. With some changes! 

[Ansercanagicus]

Hi.
First impression: The snare sounds like a bag of sand being poured down, with a very long tail in the mids. I can get used to it though.
The volume automation at 0:33 and 1:32 isn't subtle enough, and is just a surprising raise of volume.
The mix is ok but doesn't sound open, rather contrived and unbalanced. On the prechorus, and chorus especially, the balance is off. Paradoxically the first version which is less compressed can get away with it.
Well, keep up with good work.

[supep]

Hi.
First impression: The snare sounds like a bag of sand being poured down, with a very long tail in the mids. I can get used to it though.
The volume automation at 0:33 and 1:32 isn't subtle enough, and is just a surprising raise of volume.
The mix is ok but doesn't sound open, rather contrived and unbalanced. On the prechorus, and chorus especially, the balance is off. Paradoxically the first version which is less compressed can get away with it.
Well, keep up with good work.

Hi,
I'm agree that this Mix is not a good Mix    So I decided to repeat the Mix and here you can hear the new result. I hope that this time will be a little better.
Thanks for your impressions
Cheers

[Ansercanagicus]

Yes it's nice!