My Production! South of The Water

[Pakoscream]

This is my production of South of The Water! Comment please

[georgyj]

Wow, That's really loud!

[JohnSmith]

Wow... so loud... too loud... almost no dynamic left !
By the way, the delay on the intro gtr is not well calculated and feels wrong...
Another thing, guitars lack of guts on the chorus.

But that's all personnal Good job !

[Mike Senior]

A nice full presentation with nice dense drums, which really drive things along nicely. The chorus also impacts well, making good sense of the long-term mix dynamics. There seems to be sensible use of effects too, giving a sensible depth perspective.

I think you might want to reassess the vocal tone, though, because it feels rather muddy in the low mids, as well as having a rather piercing quality in the 3-4kHz zone. In addition, the overall mix tone feels rather muddy. This might be partially remedied with a little low midrange cut in your master channel, but I suspect that a complete solution is probably more involved than that -- high-pass filtering of individual channels is a big part of many mixes, and I have a feeling that you might have neglected it in this case.