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The Black Crown - Flames
#1
Oh yeah, I'm channeling Beavis on this one.


.mp3    The Black Crown- Flames.mp3 --  (Download: 12.48 MB)


.mp3    The Black Crown- FlamesV3.mp3 --  (Download: 12.48 MB)


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#2
I like it. The bass feels a bit 'tubby' and could be a little more defined. Other than that it feels pretty good.
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#3
Tried to clean up the bass a bit on V2. I had it really distorted. I kept the distorted track high passed it then copied it and removed the distortion then low passed it so the lows aren't part of the distorted sound. Don't know if it helped.
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#4
I think the first version is better. With that said, I think the low end is too heavy and is clashing with the distortion on the vocal. The drums get lost in the chorus too. Clean up the low end and take another listen to the other elements.
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#5
Found this little freebie this morning and plopped it on the Bass in V3 instead of the amp sim I had before. It's not bad for free.

https://klevgrand.se/products/freeamp
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#6
I think you did a really good job with the low end now. This is a much improved version. I think you may want to experiment a bit with compressing the vocal through the chorus. He pushes a bit and I used clip gain to adjust and automation along with a fair amount of compression to control his voice in my mix and I felt yours would benefit from a similar approach. Also sounds like you should pull a some lows out of the toms and possibly your drum mix but this is a pretty good mix. Nice work. If you'd like I would take a stab at mastering it.
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#7
Sure here is a link the wav with all the stuff removed from the master buss

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LZYvm5y...sp=sharing
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