Hi! I liked first part, balanced and punchy, clear vocals. But the 2nd part (from 2:00) has no energy, thin guitars, quite vocals and too much bass guitar and low freqs.
Here downmix of what i've done: added pitched guitar, saturated mid-freqs, added gated pad
Here downmix of what i've done: added pitched guitar, saturated mid-freqs, added gated pad