08-05-2020, 12:03 AM
Right now you have the usual stuff in your mix that went wrong, hence why I wrote the faq to give you a little help 
But I see where this is going and I like it. But please, please change the snare sound. It just doesn't fit the genre and it needs more weight and bottom end. Also some of the mixing decision you have made my sound cool if you listen to the song 1-2 times, but after that the song starts to get boring. E.g. I really love the heavy main riff, but after the 1st verse the listener might have enough of it. That's why I´ve added so many melodies and textures so you can make it interesting again, but you have to put them in the spotlight to make them work.
But I see where this is going and I like it. But please, please change the snare sound. It just doesn't fit the genre and it needs more weight and bottom end. Also some of the mixing decision you have made my sound cool if you listen to the song 1-2 times, but after that the song starts to get boring. E.g. I really love the heavy main riff, but after the 1st verse the listener might have enough of it. That's why I´ve added so many melodies and textures so you can make it interesting again, but you have to put them in the spotlight to make them work.