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Crazy Girl
#1
My take testing out this cranborne piece probably take it to analog mastering when i can get back to the studio with all this craziness going on.

Feedback is appreciated and given back


.mp3    PETER WHITE_2.mp3 --  (Download: 6.27 MB)


.mp3    PETER WHITE_5.mp3 --  (Download: 10.73 MB)


.mp3    PETER WHITE_8.mp3 --  (Download: 6.37 MB)


.mp3    PETER WHITE_16.mp3 --  (Download: 6.42 MB)


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#2
It sounds like there's a compressor with a relatively slow attack really clamping during the loud sections. It's hard to tell if it's on the mix or just the guitar section. Honestly, I kinda like it but it's a bit too obvious. If it were blended in as an effect or only on some specific tracks it might add some cool movement to the mix. Because that dominates so much of what I'm hearing I'm losing focus on the rest of the mix. The bass guitar could come up a fair amount.
I only have earbuds to listen and mix with at the moment. Take everything I say with a grain of salt.
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Mix the song, not the tracks (<-pithy)
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#3
Thanks Roy,

It's not supposed to be doing that i guess i had it set to post fader. I fixed it. Thanks for the catch
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#4
PETER WHITE_5.mp3 feels better. It's got a lot of energy which I like. I think the guitars in the heavy section might be a bit harsh. Maybe it's just the acoustics. Mostly on the right. It just kinda 'pokes' me and distracts. I feel like the low end energy falls off too much during the instrumental, marimba breaks. The snare could use more length. I think it'd help the groove to feel it decay more. The drums are a little too dry in the marimba section. I like the vocals. I kinda want a little more of them but I think if the guitars were just a little softer it'd open up space for the vocals.
Overall the balance works as long as the upper mids are tamed a bit.
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#5
Thanks for the feedback Roy i did a revision had some time, as we all do, so i cleaned up some things
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#6
In version _8 the loud sections feels good. The snare feels a little weak to me but that's it. The quiet sections come down in energy a bit too much. In the bridge the guitar 'scrapes'/accents are relatively loud to the rest of the guitar parts.
I only have earbuds to listen and mix with at the moment. Take everything I say with a grain of salt.
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Mix the song, not the tracks (<-pithy)
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#7
(18-03-2020, 08:11 PM)RoyM Wrote: In version _8 the loud sections feels good. The snare feels a little weak to me but that's it. The quiet sections come down in energy a bit too much. In the bridge the guitar 'scrapes'/accents are relatively loud to the rest of the guitar parts.

Thanks for all the feedback Roy still figuring out this piece i like it so far did another update...using it's built in summing mixer now
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