I like the raw energy of this mix. With that beeing said, the guitars sound strangely over-eq'd and fizzy, almost out of phase'ish and are way too loud. The vocals are not in the middle of the mix which can work from time to time but it feels very out of place in this song.
I think it's a bit too much of everything, especially for this kind of music which has a lot of 90'ies metal/hardcore vibes. Examples:
Biohazard
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9n-XnSoAneU
Pro Pain:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nl2HWTvRDKY
Madball:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lLes0J8AwDY
And of course - Downswet:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8ZoFbNGpBc
My advice would be: Try to do less processing and stick with the basics (volume, panning, and automation), mix with your heart and guts (turn off your overanalyzing brain from time to time) and don't focus so much on gear
Other than that you are definitely on the right track.
I think it's a bit too much of everything, especially for this kind of music which has a lot of 90'ies metal/hardcore vibes. Examples:
Biohazard
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9n-XnSoAneU
Pro Pain:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nl2HWTvRDKY
Madball:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lLes0J8AwDY
And of course - Downswet:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8ZoFbNGpBc
My advice would be: Try to do less processing and stick with the basics (volume, panning, and automation), mix with your heart and guts (turn off your overanalyzing brain from time to time) and don't focus so much on gear
Other than that you are definitely on the right track.