It feels ok. There's a lot of random clicks throughout the song so be aware of that. I'm not sure what's causing them in your mix. I like the drums and bass though I the bass might be heavy and loud. It's hard to tell on the earbuds but I'm pretty sure it could come back a little. I'm not sure about the panning of the guitars. The guitar on the right feels isolated from the rest of the band. I'd consider either panning it in more ore panning the left guitar farther left to balance out the stereo image.
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I'm glad if I'm improving musically
Correction points: Bass volume and sound quality, left and right guitar volume and sound quality
Wonderful, Yoshi. Crisp, clear and full with excellent detail and feel. My only complaint would be the snare which feels a bit naked and might use some more reverb on it.