06-07-2019, 05:00 PM
Overall it feels pretty good.
There might be too much bottom snare. It feels 'papery'. The drums are a little week overall. The need to drive the song more. Especially in the chorus.
The vocal could be de-essed and maybe come back into the mix a little. The vocal effects work but could come back and be more subtle.
The bass sounds good. The guitars work. The Guitar 1 might be too loud going into the solo. It 'telegraphs' the solo too much. The horns are ok. Maybe more 'bone and they might be too dry. The chorus synth feels ok, I think, I 'm not sure on earbuds.
That's all. The only real "negative" is the sibilance of the vocal. The rest might be personal preferences or minor tweaks.
There might be too much bottom snare. It feels 'papery'. The drums are a little week overall. The need to drive the song more. Especially in the chorus.
The vocal could be de-essed and maybe come back into the mix a little. The vocal effects work but could come back and be more subtle.
The bass sounds good. The guitars work. The Guitar 1 might be too loud going into the solo. It 'telegraphs' the solo too much. The horns are ok. Maybe more 'bone and they might be too dry. The chorus synth feels ok, I think, I 'm not sure on earbuds.
That's all. The only real "negative" is the sibilance of the vocal. The rest might be personal preferences or minor tweaks.