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Broken Man
pierovv Offline
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#1
23-03-2019, 04:53 PM
here it is my broken man


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29-03-2019, 11:35 AM
Thanks for dropping by.

You have retained a lot of the dynamics here, which I like.

The voice was one of the more challenging aspects of the multi for a number of reasons and you've presented her well in the chorus sections. I think if the verses were brought in-line with it, it would help bring her out of the mud, help clarity and provide a better sense of placement. I was wondering if you were intentionally seeking a warmer, or darker tone in the verses for some mood and contrast perhaps?
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03-04-2019, 10:21 AM (This post was last modified: 03-04-2019, 10:24 AM by pierovv.)
(29-03-2019, 11:35 AM)Monk Wrote: Thanks for dropping by.

You have retained a lot of the dynamics here, which I like.

The voice was one of the more challenging aspects of the multi for a number of reasons and you've presented her well in the chorus sections. I think if the verses were brought in-line with it, it would help bring her out of the mud, help clarity and provide a better sense of placement. I was wondering if you were intentionally seeking a warmer, or darker tone in the verses for some mood and contrast perhaps?

Thanks for your answer... you re righe i just tried ti keep the balance from voices. I really like that voices
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