Very nice. Good re-amp of the bass with a bit of an edge. Nice environment on the guitars too. Something is going on with the low mid on the lead vocal at times which I think could be cleaned up. Cymbals could come back a bit. Good bounce. Over-all a great take.
Hi ccjamz -- a decent balance of the instruments you've got going on here in general! A few things I wondered about, though:
the hi-hat and cymbals seem to dominate the mix a little, appearing too upfront and adding a touch of harshness on occasion.
The overall tonality is very bass-light compared with the references. You've also got more 4-6kHz than the library preview mix, which arguably has too much energy there already!
There's too much audible reverb, especially on the drums. Make it shorter and duller, and bring it down in level. At the moment, it sounds a bit like it's recorded in a gymnasium, whereas the reference material and rough mix are all quite upfront.
I like the little vocal delay tail following the middle section -- tickles the ear nicely!
The snare fill into Chorus 2 doesn't work for me -- it seems to interrupt the groove too much. The one into Chorus 1 is also a little awkward for the same reason.
The outro could do with a bit more of the mob vocals. As it stands the solo singer and whistler sound slightly stranded, and could do with more 'moral support' in terms of creating a party vibe.
I like the way you've fitted the Hammond here: there's width and presence, but it doesn't swamp the mix or mask the lead vocal too much.