The first version was perfect honestly, nice vibe and feel. Maybe best mix I've ever heard on this site. Only thing maybe that part where she yells out early in the song (0:59) kind of sounded weird. I still gave you 5 stars.
The second one sounds like more a not-so-vintage mainstream thing, also good. Most everyone would be happy if they could get this mix, but don't be afraid to take it further than they can take it. For me its a little too safe, I imagine it would be great for record execs and musicians over your shoulder though. The first one had the fat snare, quieter overheads, soaring voice, clarity I personally enjoy.
If I were you just trust your initial instincts, they are really soulful and that translates to a great listening experience.
The second one sounds like more a not-so-vintage mainstream thing, also good. Most everyone would be happy if they could get this mix, but don't be afraid to take it further than they can take it. For me its a little too safe, I imagine it would be great for record execs and musicians over your shoulder though. The first one had the fat snare, quieter overheads, soaring voice, clarity I personally enjoy.
If I were you just trust your initial instincts, they are really soulful and that translates to a great listening experience.