The first draft left me feeling a little between a rock and a hard place. There were some timing problems, most I attended to. Loop1 for example, was one of the biggest culprists that messed with my anticipators and that old Mr Expectation. During the original intro it hit 5 times, and that's an odd number. Later on it hit for 6, which again is a non-musical cue here. Most I'd already fixed in my vision, now they are all done in the v2.
I've cut 8 bars, made the intro more musically cohesive with the main verses and theme, making the most of the guitar part. I like the transition much better than my first throw and comes in with determination after 8 bars of the filter build which for me made it more interesting and compelling.
This is a shorter delivery, but musically it moves rather than kind of hovering in places.
Many mods.
Awesome project to have a play about with. Thanks to the artist for the opportunity.