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AGI-MiX version of my father never love by trafficker
#1
Mix on my father never love
Just listen and help me with your feedback
Thanks


.mp3    Trafficker - My Father Never Loved Me.mp3 --  (Download: 3.1 MB)


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#2
Hi AGI,

I like the drum tones you got on this mix. However the drums, vocals and keys dominate the mix way too much level-wise, so the cohesion of the song is lost. If you turn your mix right down, just above the level of the ambient noise in your environment and listen to it, you'll hear what I'm talking about.

One of the issues is that you have thinned out the rhythm guitar too much and it doesn't meld with the bass guitar and form the monolithic riff that is the signature of the song. With this sort of riff-based blues-rock, it's essential to get the guitar and bass working together in a complimentary way. Try aiming for a fuller guitar sound with more low mids.
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#3
Thanks your critique is very important to me
I will work on the guitars
For the payment am not sure on that
But anyway thanks
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#4
(10-09-2018, 08:25 PM)aman4destiny Wrote: For the payment am not sure on that

"Please pay it forward" in my signature has nothing whatever to do with money. It means: "Please go and listen to some other people's mixes and comment on them". That's the only way this site can keep going.

If everyone posts mixes without critiquing anyone else's mix, then all you would end up with is a whole lot of mixes posted. Blush

So, it's just a friendly reminder to reciprocate the goodwill throughout the community here. Smile
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#5
Thanks I will
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