I’m not sure what you had trouble with, your mix sounds quite fine… except for the bass which will vanish when played on a system without a low end.
Keep it up!
Most mixes done in Reaper or Bitwig on a MacBook Pro using Sony MDR-7506 headphones and some hifi system with old Saba speakers in a small-ish untreated room. If I commented on your mix, please check the board for my mix and reciprocate. :) Thank you!