My first mix on here. 'I'm Alright'

[Patient_Zero]

Hey guys.

This is my first mix submission on this site. Heres hoping I impress!

This wasn't mixed through studio monitors because I'm too poor to afford them.

Let me know what you guys think.

[Moonwrist]

To me this sounds really dry. Maybe you could put all reverbs up a little bit?
Perc are quite low and I think they kind of belong to this type of music.
You could pan things a little wider. Now it sounds like all the guitars are in center and only OHs are panned.