Turkuaz - Looking Tough, Feeling Good (critiques plz)

[LukasL]

Hey Guys,

my first draft of the Turkuaz, Looking tough feelin good. Critiques are appreciated.

Lukas

[Earth Frequencies]

Hey Lukas,

the first thing I think you need to address is putting some life into your mix, its very dull & uninteresting.
Try utilizing a professionally mixed reference track to get you in the ball park.

[deadislandrecords]

Hey Lukas,

the first thing I think you need to address is putting some life into your mix, its very dull & uninteresting.
Try utilizing a professionally mixed reference track to get you in the ball park.

I second that; also throw a little body into this!!!! Feels like so much of the lower mids are gone. In Vox and horns it's particularly noticeable.